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where my heart

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this is my very first flash, so i am not sure it's good or bad, so i need your help, to give me comments on this flash. well then i hope this is worst it of your DL time!
"JA"

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8 for Heart, but...

I can see what you're going for, and if it could make those last few broad jumps i would rate it higher, but i got knit picky with the animation. (before i steamroll onward, i liked the music choice) If you did the drawings of those people, i like your style, but it would be nice to see a little more animation, or stressing of the drawings. (like, more depth to them, shading i suppose?) As for backgrounds, i would go either all the way to really nice, drawn backgrounds, or very little "props" so you emphasize the characters. (oh, another thing, i like the dialogue, it seemed natural as beginners go, and i suppose i'm a beginner as well, <D) These, of course, are just how i would do it, but i still like how simple and small it is.

you gettin somewhere

not bad for a first, unlike some others 3 months ago, was the last time i've been here, and it seems, people gettin better. good job, keep at it

ok...................

good chick film but i didn't think it was that great. The music was pretty good though.

I fell asleep halfway through it

make something interesting next time, your work shows promise.

not bad

good job for a beginner

Credits & Info

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1,915
Votes
21
Score
3.48 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 22, 2003
1:32 AM EDT