Hmm
That was okay,kind of funny,i guess good job??
Author Comments
This is my first attempt at a flash cartoon! The concept is to make this a series of short toons with the "What If ..." theme! This first toon is very low key because it is on my portfolio but the next few may be more risky! I have a few other toons on my site as well so go take a gander if you will!
nice 1 ryan!
i luv it how dat dude gets ran over by da same car twice in a row.
Really cool.
Man, MY first 'attempt' in making cartoons had absolutely NO TWEENING and not even it color! Mine was like, only ONE LAYER and ONE SCENE and all FBF! that is AMAZING for first timers! Awesomed out, man! Keep it up!
NICE
THATS BETTER THEN MOST PEOPLE'S ANIMATIONS THAT THEY HAVE BEEN WORKING ON FOREVER! FOR A FIRST TIME I WOULD SAY THAT THIS ANIMATION IS AMAZING... I KNOW WHEN I MAKE MY FIRST ANIMATION IT WILL BE NOTHING LIKE WHAT IF VEGGIES SCREAMED WHEN YOU ATE THEM!GOOD JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
uhhh...down there
The animation was very good especially for your first try. Most people's first try is crap but you were great for your's. Congrats!