Not bad...

Really looked like a movie trailer heh...btw there's some typographical errors...hope you'll look into it =P and erm...I understand you draw the characters like those in DBZ...which is..the design of the characters...like the face(eyes, nose, etc) and the muscles...I draw jap anime characters, so I do that too..
And when i read your previous reply...okay when you're five and draw like stick figures, fine, I draw SLIGHTLY more detailed, but its near stick figures, plus my characters that time looked flat =P When i was 9 i guess, i started drawing better, until 11 i can really draw one out, recently i just mastered how to really draw one...both male and female =P
Anyways nice one..looking forward for your movie =)

Good.

I normally hate trailers with a passion, but this was prety good. Good attention to detail (loved the hair blowing in the wind), nice art, appropriate music. Looking forward to the actual movie, which is a surprise because I don't like dragonball z!

haha

sure i bet you made up the chara when you were five but not how the looked plus if you made them look like that when you were five you could sue db cor for stealing your idea!

erm.........................

....so you made the cartoon and the characters up when you were five uh, well i find that hard to beleive, but what i do find easy to beleive is that your an asshole, cos this flash is crap

Needs some polish, but...

... A good effort, actually. It could use a little work, though; I'd make sure the words that show up are more centered, for example, and the writing itself could use a bit of tightening up (for example, the second part about the 'perfect mate'; I'd remove the part about the 'weapon' and just leave it as 'perfect mate'... it still makes sense, and it's a little more profound), but all told, I'd certainly like to see where you're going with this. :-)