hehe

not bad a bit short but what else could you have done :S??

i liked the twist at the end

Lol It Was Funny.

Lol, That Was Pretty Damn Funny. Swell Job

First timers are rarely good

Hey, i thought that flash wasn't brilliant. I no most first trys aren't good, but maybe i should watch ur recent work if u have any.
They maybe some other pieces of ur work I'll like

lets see...

So this is your first submission to ng. I thought that it was good for a first but i got to tell you the truth.. It sucked. Here are some reasons why i only gave you a 2 for it. First you need to study a little about your things in the story. A samurai would use a curved (not straight) blade called a katana to fight or a tanto. Also a samurai woudn't wear black all over like a ninja. Samurai like to stand out to there enemies.second there needed to be a background or anything but just not white. The only reason i gave you a two is because i thought it was funny when the watermelon beat the samurai.

Sincerly,
samurai of osaka

Hehe..

Hehe... A definite light hearted flash. one of your first, i assume.
He got his ass kicked by a watermelon. :)