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Thats gotta hurt ;)

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Ok, Here are some pointers

Im giving you a five for trying, and also, here are some pointers:

Smoother tweening - it makes it MUCH better, trust me.
a Little More animation - not just the basic movements,
and some other little touches always help.

Good Luck!
NWP

Still not good

The character seems so one dimensional and non-movement. More could have been done to him in the repeat animation as he's walking, such as clothing/hair/body parts moving as he is stepping. Also, more could have been done to the background, such as buildings or a park or other animations. Also, when doing a shadowy figure, one usually puts them behind the main character as he is the one everything will be occuring to and covering him the way you did tends to undo the focus upon him and his actions.

All in all, good start for being a 2003 upload and I still ask "What was THAT?" but it still seems weird to me.

it wasn't as bad as i thought i'd be

last time i checked it takes a but more than a hore to walk into a poll. but i do get the idea.

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Jun 17, 2003
1:36 PM EDT