this is my first animation other than "the ball" that my teacher taught the class. I started this before the ronin game but finished after. im just looking for feed back
Pretty Good!
The graphics were great in the close-ups, but needs some more detail and work in the characters, setting, and...when it's not closing up.
The plot needs some work and be smoother, it was pretty confusing in most scenes. I liked how it had a lot of good sound clips, but in some instances it needed music.
awesome for a first submission
hey man this is an awesome video for your first submission. the graphics, as alreayd said, would get some work done on them, but otherwise, thumbs up for the effort! keep at it man!!
um..ok?
....yeeaa.. didn't quite get it. in other words...... it sucks balls, man.
Good job!
However, I noticed a LOT of parallels from the NES game Ninja Gaiden. The deul at the start with the two people jumping, the view of the main character up close movin while he looks at the mountain, and some other slight details. Just wondering if you ever played the game yourself, it though the similarities were VERY amusing. Good job on animation, only the drawings could be improved. Short of 3D and voice and better music, I cant think of many ways to improve this. Well done!
yea I realized the simularities when i was inches from compleating it and thanx for the advice thats why i posted it
GJ Dave!
Hey nice work... and to all of you who say its bad... TRY MAKE A BETTER 1 URSELF!!!!! oh and cool mountain there! =D