I love the direction this is taking! It really is developing a plot. Granted, I still have no idea what's going on for the most part. What matters is that the voice acting is fantastic. I guess her name's Melony now. That's a fairly original name.
You have such creative character designs. My favorite part is probably when he fires at the end. It really does make me want to see more. Is that guy her brother? The animation does seem better.