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This episode is basically just an introduction to the team. Expect 2 more episodes, each more actionpacked than the last. :)

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my music

wOOt thanks for using my music! I love it when people do!

About the movie:

One drawback is the TONS of clock with guns shooting each other thing. It was all good... the graphics could be better but i know how hard it is =) If i had to point out one graphical error was the blood. It was kind of... well... cheezy :P Also try some frame-by-frame animating. Not it all, but things like the blood, and fire. not just moving around.

=) ty

vote 5, good movie

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dandandan4 responds:

thank ya much :)

Just dont mess

Seriously, me an leek will AWP your ass

dandandan4 responds:

you sure can.... you sure can...

fifened

very nice scope effect. smooth sir quite smooth.

dandandan4 responds:

thanks..its just a bit of motion tweening. and overlapping frames.

Good Graphics, but Uneventful Story

Very unclock-like for a Clock movie. Far too series. Clocks with guns... Way too melodramatic.

Clocks are badasses... Clocks are comedians. Clock cartoons are more like episodes of The Smurfs or Tiny Toons, not a war movie.

Some neat backgrounds, I must say. I've always admired your artistic skills. You just need to work on your content. Good art is nothing if the characters and situations are interesting enough to keep the audience's attention.

Also, instead of motion tweening the speech lines, try just using three keyframes of animation. It will look a lot better that way.

You've also got some layer problems going on. That beverage clock was on top of Leek, even though he was supposed to be in the background. Not sure if you noticed or not.

In a nutshell... good graphics, boring story.

dandandan4 responds:

thanks for bein honest man, instead of just sayin "woo LOVED IT!!" (although i have no problem with those inflating my ego) yeah, i just kinda did this one as i thought it up..but the next 2 are thoguht out already... im tryin to add some funny one liners and stuff in there..yeah i did notice the beverage overlapping leek... AFTER i submitted it... anyways.. thanks for the comments on the art :) but admired... i think your pushin it a bit radish :)

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Votes
13
Score
4.20 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2003
7:07 AM EDT
Genre
Action