just a short little movie i made for fun. not expecting much, just leave your thoughts on the film, and tell me what you thought and how to improve my flash skills please. enjoi MOUSE OUTFIT
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^^Good Points^^
Decent animating and addition of sound effects in this movie. They made this a lot more interesting.
^^Needs Improving^^
First off, "Short funny stick movie" as a title is just asking for trouble. I expected nothing from this movie when I read that, and that's basically what I got. A plain white background, and the same joke used over and over doesn't add up to a really great movie.
nice try
It wasn't the best, but I've seen much worse. You have some talent. Some tips:
1. More sound. Like when the guy falls, you need a thump or something.
2. Explore the concept a little more. Fill it out and make it longer. I dunno, have the dude fire a gun and shoot himself in the ass or something, just some little things to fill it out.
3. Don't listen to the fuckheads that put this down. You have some talent, don't let these jealous pricks put you off. It was good, keep it going.
The dancer
Sweet..
Simple as the mind of my ex,but yet i did get a chuckle out of it..Not bad..
it was okay
wasnt very funny
Eh, it was alright.
It was okay, really not funny though... good try.