Redo it again.
Well, the story's okay, I guess...but everything was executed so horribly...It looks like a four year old did this work...Though I like Disturbed, I really don't think it was suitable for that. I say, spend more time on it, improve some of the art, maybe add voices, or at least spell right. Resubmit a re-re-done, and it'll do so much better, I'm sure.