alright
good story but bad graphics.. try a little harder next time on the graphics it will make ur flash like 5X better
Author Comments
Fellow voters of Newgrounds,
This is the Prelude to My Second Movie, Plok's Quest for Power.
This took tonnes of effort to make. My brother makes all the movies, so don't ive me any credit for them. His alias is Quicksilver01.
I know that the music isn't that hot, but my brother didn't want to bother changing it , so he left it like that despite my pleas. I also wanted sound effects, but he wanted to wait to see if people wanted them. What do you think?
Vote fairly, leave a review.
Oh. And Mars is shining unusually bright tonight.
VelvetDarkRocks
graphics bro.
I liked your story man, I really did. It could be intresting to watch.
The Graphics are just plain bad bro. I can see the effort you put in to make some epic shots. But if you dont put in enough time on how it looks than it will look bad. And , also it's obvious that you cut some serious coners. Such as the white lines around the animation. Please don't take offense to this dude. Just trying to help
1/5
Pretty cool
This looks very promising. It seems like such a wonderful idea for a movie. Now all you have to do, is pull it off. It's good, graphics are cool, plot's awesome, sound is fine, although, like the rest of the reviewers here, i think that there should be some voices added. But if that is not possible, make the written dialogue in a consistent way. It'll look better that way. All in all, should be a cool movie. good job. keep up the good work.
VelvetDarkRocks responds:
cool.
the sounds seem pretty demanded. i wouldn't think they would be, but hey.
this might take some effort though, cos i really hate the sound of my voice.
Great story
the plot has me itching to see what happenes next i like these kind of things but i have to say it again the plot is godly how did you think of that well i cant wait to see the next great job................wow........
VelvetDarkRocks responds:
To be honest, I only made up the plot after I finished my second movie.
Well, thanks heaps. I'll keep drawing
Not the best, not the worst
I like the fact that you put effort and thought into this. I liked the music you used for the attack, it fit. Sure, the graphics may be off, but hey, its still okay. good job.
Couple questions
1. Do you have the story line all thought out?
2. How long will the rest of them be (I noticed this one was short)?
VelvetDarkRocks responds:
Answers to your questions.
1) Yes it is all thought out, but I only made the plot after the completion of the second movie.
2) As a general rule, as Plok gains more power, he will be facing more foes, so every movie will get a little bit longer