I know the animation on this isnt that good, becuase its quite an early cartoon. I am just testing what people like and what you dont like, so your reviews would be much apriciated, thank you.
You can check more cartoons like this at my website - www.yaksville.tk - new flash design coming soon.
It would have worked as a comic
This doesn't work as a flash cartoon, you messed up the comedic timing, the sound quality was horrible. There was practically no animation. Yet, at the same time, there was a lot of potential there. It's sad that it turned out the way it did.
this was dumb
could have worked better with more time. i stopped after lawyer....wtf?
UM yea for random shit ...
it was pritty fucking random man...good flash...better if there lips moved tho...keep up the good work
All my 4's are belong to this!
Not bad man! For a short 180k animation you sure have made the most of it! I mostly review short small files coz of my slow connection, but yours is one of the good 'uns. Animation could be improved, but your humor and length of the animation is great!
Smooth
This was soooo cool. Skid. We need to promote funny but not neciserily well animated cartoon an newgrounds. On newgrounds people tend to vote on the quality of the animating not the conent. We need more animations like this one!