OMG

OMG that was soo funny, actually its so stupid its funny made me laugh, damn i cant believe i wasted 5 minutes watching that bull shit

look I am not trying to be a jack ass but

this is really lame (!!!!!no offense!!!!!)
last thing I need is another pissed person trying to blam my stuff everyday
anyways don't get mad I sure you can do a lot better okay can you do me a favor go look at my element cartoons and games and tell me what you think and one thing I am not being rude
!!at all!! but this could use some work the reason the score is low is because not many people like it but it does have potential

ZZZzzzz....

Boring.

Can be improved upon

This movie is decent and very simple in design. The drawings are very simple and rely on many motion tweens to make it work. Don't fret about this because most simple movies are good, but they cannot be taken as serious effort-filled movie.

Too be honest, I don't think I can save this one with any suggestions. But I am going to give you a few because every little-bit helps. I suggest that you practice your art work and drawing abilities a little more, before you focus on your storylines. You characters all look the same, except for the one with Manililo's picture.

Also both the girlfriend's and the main character's houses look the same. So if you make them look like you put more effort into them, since they look like you've only changed their colours.

Hope this helps

about average

this wasnt too bad my friend. animation was a little under-performing but it ran nice and i have seen so so much worse that this. it was kinda funny but at the same time quite boring. sound went good tho - cheers