Stop complaining about the dialogue. It's a visual novel, like it says in the description. If, you don't like visual novels then why play one? Don't give me the excuse that you didn't know, either. If you read the description then you would have known.
I liked the game a lot. Some things could have been done before, though. Transitioning music could have been done better. It actually would have been nice if there was just silence in some parts. There could have been a few more choices other then just two. Doesn't have to be a lot of choices just enough to space them mostly evenly throughout the game. I love the story, though.