I really liked it, but I was waiting for more horror since it's categorized under it. An excellent and nice story though. Kept me interested. I sure am waiting for the next episode. Keep up the good work.

so when is the next part out

This was enjoyable and interesting and all, but... how is this a game? I only got two choices, and they were at the beginning. Everything else was clicking the screen to progress the story.

This visual novel was well thought out, and I liked the story, I relate to the main character in many ways which made me like it more. Because this is supposed to be a visual novel, it did all mechanics were placed fairly well as far as flash goes. But the story developed very awkwardly. It jumped around to much and when an event happened, it felt too rushed, which I understand. But without spoiling anything, I will say that the ending felt really pushed and I disliked how it was done, I would have felt much better if you went on to explain a couple days later then skipped ahead instead of doing what you did. Then the way it ended felt really rushed and awkward as well as for having a story like this, obvious to what would happen and felt, at least to me, as a useless cliffhanger. But besides these I enjoyed it very much as the story was well thought out and for being as short as it was, the characters were well developed.

Good idea but seems to need some more research. (maybe?)
The idea seems, a little disorganized, a little bit more like a rough draft rather than a polished work. Its not finished so I guess I can't really say much about that only that it seemed a bit random rather than planned out. Mind you I like randomness but I can think about the many different ways a certain situation could unfold and possibly allow these possibilities to be choosable is my only real suggestion. (Basically I wouldn't mind seeing multiple endings.)

Either way I'm interested in the game and looking forward for the next installment.