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Boy with Nails for Eyes

June 12, 2010 –
November 30, 2020
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

***VIEWING IN FULLSCREEN STRONGLY RECOMMENDED***


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The Boy with Nails for Eyes is an independent motion comic, set in a grimy, grey little seaside town trapped by a brick-and-iron wall of factories. The story follows a young boy as he undertakes a quest that will draw him to the town's knotted heart, and into the domain of the shadowy hunger that stalks its streets.


The prologue tells of the days, unknown years ago, when a murder of crows swarmed upon the town. Haunted by their cries from daybreak to dark, the townsfolk experience strange visions...


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The story is best viewed in FULLSCREEN MODE, so that the text is clearly legibile without having to use the zoom function. Full instructions on viewing the story are given in the loading screen.


A lofi version of the comic, featuring the images and text only, is available on my website (www.basement-garden.co.uk), which is linked from my profile. Also available are wallpapers and music downloads, plus the next chapter of the story itself (I'll be posting a Newgrounds version of this fairly soon, but my focus at the moment is on a comic commission, and on getting the art for the third chapter finished!)


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Really pleased with the response so far - thanks to everyone for the encouragement and feedback. [In fact, I'm now quite overwhelmed by the level of response - thanks again to everyone who reviewed, whether you liked it or not. And cheers to Newgrounds for featuring this! I'll try to reply to everyone but I can't promise I will - if you really want to get an answer, the best idea is to email me through my website.]


I always intended the comic to be viewed fullscreen (I even considered making it obligatory, or automatically going to fullscreen when the comic starts, but I don't like that idea any more than, probably, anyone else does), but I do hear everyone on the text.


Later stages of the story will be a little heavier on the text (which is why I had to go for a small font size from the get-go) so in all honesty I think the text may well stay as it is, for the sake of consistency (and at the risk of pissing off a few people). Again, I *strongly* suggest *fullscreen viewing*, if the text is too small for you; unfortunately the highest file dimensions allowed by Newgrounds is even smaller than the original file dimensions(1060px/745px), so for this reason fullscreen is an even better idea from my point of view.


Cheers


S

Reviews

Shifted my expectations

After that poor begining with quotes, guessing you were trying to create some tension, I was thinking "this is gonna be crappy". But when it started, the crows, culminating with the giant steampunk robots, I was blown away. I can compare this to many things, like Edgar Allan Poe, Salvador Dali, and even a song by Gorillaz The dance of the dead. Sound, and artwork were beautiful, text was a bit hard, given the fact that I am not a navite english speaker. I must congratulate you for such a well coregrafed work of art, and say that I am eagerly waiting for the next chapters.

<deleted> responds:

Both Poe and Dali are two of my favourites. Dali was a huge influence when I was first learning to paint, so thank you, vitezaucide

Solemn

Wow. That was great, really good atmosphere and excellent art, im not so sure of the story so far but the whole mystery and mood of the piece by far makes up for it, and as you say this is only a prologue. I would agrea that a narrator would be good because having to repeatedly zoom in on different spots for the text was kind of jarring, still very good stuff, great presentation and amazing art. I look forward to the next part!

<deleted> responds:

Hey PIED - I actually considered a narrator for a little while when I first started this, but I decided against it for a variety of reasons. Aside from the logistics, and the amount of extra time it would take (on top of drawing, photoshop, animation, music...), I actually think one of the strengths of comics is the reader's control of the reading pace. It's something I really wanted to carry over to a motion comic - I feel it's something they've lacked so far.

But anyway, glad you liked it, and hope you enjoy the next bit when it arrives

epic

epic
very whell made
cant get other words to describe
5/5
10/10
God work

<deleted> responds:

Cheers!

Great job!

Loved this! There are a few small issues regarding the text, I think, and I agree on what Mr. Hemfrik says about a narrator being a good idea. Anyways, looking forward to read more of this!

<deleted> responds:

Hey essi - As I said to PIED I actually decided against a narrator in the early stages for a few reasons (not least the amount of time it would take), but very glad you enjoyed it

Tim Burton?

I once read a poem by Tim Burton with the same title (or allmost the same, I think "for" was "in his", not sure :p).

It's not really my style type of thing, but it's nicely done.

Sometimes the screen is black for a pretty long time (like 3 seconds or more :o, that's a little too long). Maybe because I forwarded and backwarded a lot. Like: "Oh my, I think I missed something, let's get back to it". And then "Aah yes, lets get on with it".

<deleted> responds:

Yeah, I remember the Tim Burton poem! When I was first writing the story, someone asked me if I'd been inspired by it. I had to say no, since I'd never heard of the poem. I was terrified that Burton would already have done something similar, so I was glad to see his poem was different from what I intend with my story - and, as you say, his poem was about The Boy with Nails in His Eyes.

Fair enough if it's not your style, glad you thought it was well put together. I think the long stretches of black serve to control the pacing of the story - that said, there is a skip function (clicking anywhere on the page skips to the end state) so people who want to go at a fast pace can.

Anyway, cheers for the review

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