I liked it

Its a real story, but a little messed up.

pretty good :)

Haha as a catholic(kinda) this made me laugh. However it felt like there was something missing.

And to tyrfig: That is why SUPER religous people scare me. The are willing to die for something that may or may not be true, and even if there religion turns out to be the "true" religion then they might still be basing there beliefs of that religion on incorect text.

not bad

Not quite as funny as the previous ones.

And at AmanPyroman: It isn't about "messing up" It's about making a decision. When translating a work to a new language, there might be many words or phrases that have slightly different meanings, but still count as translations of your original text. Or there might be no words or phrases at all that mean what you're trying to say. At that point, either a re-write must be done, or a particular meaning must be decided upon.

You cannot translate anything without retaining 100% of the original meaning of a text. And even within the same language the text developed many different versions. Small choices and re-writes over the course of a thousand years or so can add up.

Nice graphics.

But boring writing. Sorry :(

Ooohhh, almost...

Great artwork, I mean that, really. It's just that, well, the dialogue was trivial and not really relevant, even though I really like satires. These are the beginnings of really good themes and such, but not explored past a very shallow level.
But I like the art. Its good.