Excellently done, my friend!
I love the style of your artwork. This story looks like it has a lot of promise. As a screenwriter with moderate success, my advice to you is to never give up when you're trying to get your movie made. :)
What really put it over the top was the music. The peacefulness it had made me want to continue playing again and again, even though it's nothing much more than a (very pretty) dress-up game. Which Cirque album did you get the music from?
In any event, this is a great idea and a great character creator game. Kudos!