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Adeshra Character Creator

February 19, 2007 –
October 25, 2021
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Unknown to most I have written several original stories, the oldest of which is called "Adeshra." While I have yet to create a full film based on its story, this game will allow you to explore Adeshra's cast and create your own character from a library of over 150 articles of clothing. NOTE: because I choose an awkward 3/4 view, not all items work together. Enjoy!

Reviews

Nice to see your work again.

I've always enjoyed your work, ever since I saw your link from the Clanbob site. It's nice to see your still working. Even if you can't release Adeshra as a flash or movie, I think you should still have some form of publication. Even as a story, it seems deep and evolved to me. Of course, I do understand how a story becomes so layered that you wonder when to stop adding. However, Adeshra, as it stands now, is fantastic. Just thought you would like a 'somewhat' unbiased opinion.

<deleted> responds:

Wow. You nailed my biggest problem on the head. I have been writing Adeshra for 15 years now, and each year, the story keeps changing to the point where you wouldnt even notice it anymore. What happens is that I have way too many good ideas for one story, and I have throwing them out. So it gets to complex, and I end up wanting to rewrite it. All in all, it is a vicious cycle. However, I like where the story is right now, and if I can settle my mind to it, I may novelize the story. Soon... Thanks for staying a loyal fan!

Nice.

What impressed me the most was the costume/character designs. You've managed to combine a diverse range of styles and character types all into one 'world', so to speak, so it'd be easy to see them all in the same setting.

The music was just the icing on the cake, can I ask what the soundtrack was?

Here's hoping to see more stuff from you.

<deleted> responds:

As you may notice in the "cast" section I tried to develop 5-6 cultures each with their distinctive style. As for the music, it is Ka, from Cirque Du Soliel.

Very nice - one nitpick

Very nice concept. Loved the art and the music. I hope to see more of this.

Just one thing - Copyright isn't a verb, it is a noun. So where you wrote "characters copywritten by XXX", should only be "Copyright of XXXX"

Cheers!

(claps and cheers)

You sir are a bloody genius. Y ou wrote your own story dsigned original characters and it looked fantstic. One day i hope you get you book made and a 5 million hits awrd. Sincerly the Plumpmonk

Great work!

Nice... I thought it was cool, especially the idea of "Adeshra". Is there any way I could get my hands on the non graphical version of it?

<deleted> responds:

While it is 100% written, only about 10-20% of it is in "pure" novel form. The rest is complete, but wouldn't make much sense to anyone except myself yet. Maybe I'll publish the story when I get the whole thing written. One day..

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