Unique, and full of cool green people.

An awesome amount of very unique options here. Packed full of character. Rather basic selection system, but that's not really important here. It made me want to name my character, and pop it in a world where it can run around meeting other green people.

I fully understand what you said about not wanting to do it an injustice to how you see it in your head. Maybe shorts or more preview type things like this could be possible. Stuff mostly unrelated to the central story perhaps. Whether to build up technique, or to fill out any little extra parts of the world you might like to show. Could be cool.

Nice music too. =)

Mechanically the 'dress up' could be a little better. Mainly just in selection method. But Im giving a 10 for the story and setting.

I loved this

I have made about 15 people on this and printed them off. I made me (it's on my DeviantArt)! Anyway, one thing I noticed... the story page telling about the Lianh. The boots label them as the "Gi", and the other... thing labels them as the "Nu". That's the only problem tho.

shweet!

i lovez it! i just wish you could save and name your characters! also, some peices of claothing dont fit, cause the boobs on some the under shirts stick right out the side of the over shirts. also, i wish i could print off a character sheet, or give them tools or weapons, and dare i ask, a back ground? oh well, i had alot of fun with it, and i await eagerly the series.

Awesome! I fucking love it. Also...

This is the single greatest "dress-up" flash I have ever come across. It has a story, it has unique clothing and almost all possible combinations of clothing work when put together! Awesome! I love it. I fucking love it.

Also, I just thought I'd tell you, there's a spelling error on the second page of the "What is Adeshra?" thing, the first being what you see when entering that area. You put the typo "wriitng", which I assume is "writing".

"To me, wriitng a good story is an evolutionary task."

niiiice

create a maple storie dress up too