Amazing Storyline!

There isn't a feature film? Well, there should be.

This has the potential for the Big Screen

Im serious, you have an amazing story here. I wouldnt mind if you animated it and hosted it here, so I could veiw this incredible script for free, but this seriously has the potential for a major motion picture, if you want to do the thing justice. I wish I was half as good of a wrighter as you, but none of my works end up seeming original. You can always find something like it. HOOOOWEVER, I am working on something called The Circuit. It seems to have the potential for an original story, but I keep trying to weedle in my favorite characters, who, quite frankly, are not very original. Sure, I've worked hard on their personalities, but it's a hard pill to swallow, the fact that they wont fit in. Meh. You've got something great here, I can tell you that.

Wooooot!

your SO awsome at dress-ups! this rocks! i lov it!

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WOW! I love the story line! Is there a whole book? If so, can I find it in a bookstore or a library?

I came to this by chance, and it blew me away

I read your story word for word, and I only wish I could write like that. I am abit of a writer, but have only come up with something that turned out, to my dismay, much like a mix between the movies Constantine and Stigmata.

But this is not about the story, this is about the flash. First of all, I loved the music, and I may just buy the soundtrack that you listed there.
Most people just go onto a dress-up game to rather, instead, dress them down, unfortunately. Well, I, like the title says, came onto this submission by chance, and got sucked into the story.

So basically this is a review on your writing, but seriously, can anyone blame me? It's an amazing story, and I fully respect your decision to hold the full production of it until you know it's ready. What can I say, I'm a sucker for quality. And when this does become something, I'll be the first in line to watch it.