It seemed thet you cut the song to your own use, I could be wrong having never listend to the real thing myself. While this is a good thing to do in most flash vidios, I would have scored it much higher had you use the entire song as this fits closer to the music vidio catagory.
This flash is one step above a music vidio, actually having a story behind it, but it would still be better if it was the full length.