Hey guys this is a webcomic im working on for my site, its not really suposed to be funy... yet, but I drew everything with a mouse, so forgive the graphics, but i like critisizim. anyway, enjoy.
Looks fine, but the text is hard to read.
Fix that.
Got a site to host it on?
Please post in My Art Thread!
| your- possesive | you're- you are | ur- not a word | their- belonging to them | there- referring to place | they're- they are |
GET IT RIGHT.
At 8/31/07 10:28 AM, IBx1 wrote: No, he doesn't. Sorry.
Yea I do, I just didnt want to upload it to my server yet, the site is www.chocomoloko.com
Looks really good, nice layout and great flow of the story..Most comics are made with the same frontal shots of the characters faces and the story leaves alot to be desired.
This looks really really good, one thing the font is hard to read, should be black and placed in a more readeable area so it doesn't mess with the story telling. Throw in some perspective (birds eye, eye, ground level ) shots and the art will intensify the story itself.
If you need another artist to help, holla!
At 8/31/07 07:50 PM, pigeonmilk wrote: Looks really good, nice layout and great flow of the story..Most comics are made with the same frontal shots of the characters faces and the story leaves alot to be desired.
This looks really really good, one thing the font is hard to read, should be black and placed in a more readeable area so it doesn't mess with the story telling. Throw in some perspective (birds eye, eye, ground level ) shots and the art will intensify the story itself.
If you need another artist to help, holla!
Hey Thanks, I dont know if you saw the second post, I realized the image was bigger then what it allowed , so I hosted it on a site, the text should be ok now.
