Froggo is always watching.
I'm going to shit your pants
[Pronouns are they/them btw]
The beginning was not bad, but verses from the second one and following have just too long lines for the theme you've chosen. If you want to translate the feeling of racing pulse and anxiety, you might consider making longer verses with very short lines, probably with alliteration and ending with a plosive consonants.
"Please don't tap on the glass. Penguins can see and hear you alright. They just don't care."
