Give me a 1-10 score

[RdnTv]

Tell me what sticks out immediately when you read this, pros and cons.

[TheShokBlok]

I like the art style, but idk who's the guy talking to in the last panel.

[RdnTv]

At 3/20/24 03:53 PM, TheShokBlok wrote: I like the art style, but idk who's the guy talking to in the last panel.

He's supposed to be talking to the girl, while she's in a smaller 'reactionary window'

[TheShokBlok]

At 3/20/24 04:55 PM, RdnTv wrote:

At 3/20/24 03:53 PM, TheShokBlok wrote: I like the art style, but idk who's the guy talking to in the last panel.

He's supposed to be talking to the girl, while she's in a smaller 'reactionary window'

I see! Maybe separate the panel or make the live window reaction more noticeable, cuz otherwise it kinda looks like she's just behind him.

Otherwise very good!

[XwaynecoltX]

7 nice art style cute characters and good vibrant color

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