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Writing a story, looking for feedback!

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So! Some of y'all may vaguely remember me from a bit ago! I've been here for about a year or two working on a little story called "Reaper's Storm". Back then, the story was incredibly barebones, and I was already asking people for feedback and support on what was literally just an idea and a Discord server.


People were rightly critical about that-


Anyways, now I have the first 7 or so chapters written! They're not final, but they're pretty damn close! The entire story is planned out - with most of book 1 already drafted out - and all I need is to... y'know... write it.


The story itself intends to be a sci-fi/fantasy story following a cast of characters and their development through an increasingly fucked-up post-apocalyptic world. It has threats ranging from an advanced totalitarian regime that once had the entire world in its palm to soul-ripping eldritch monstrosities that now roam the planet after the world-wide event known as "Rigor Mortis"!


Below, you can read the chapters for yourself and tell me what you think!


[BIG BRIGHT AND OBVIOUS LINK TO BOOK]


(There's also a Patreon if you're interested, although feedback is more than enough :D)



The creator of Reaper's Storm! Come read it here:

https://tapas.io/series/rstorm/info

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