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New story idea 2020-02-02 13:43:20


So I've been wanting to make this story for a while, I came up with it near the end of my freshman year of high school. I figured I would reach out to you guys for some more ideas and give each character some more depth and emotion. this is just a rough story, of what I currently have


So the story goes like this so far: Our main characters are Ashley (Main focus & Samantha's love interest) and Elisa (Ashley's sister), and Samantha Yuen.


Ashley is recovering after about two years of physical and verbal abuse from her homophobic father, starting near the middle of her sophomore year leading to the end of her junior year, (Elisa is treated differently because she is straight). Despite this, Ashley tries to stay super positive and happy so she doesn't have to tell anyone else about her problems, and she slowly begins isolating herself from others, and she doesn't see how well she's doing. Ashley is one of the most popular people in her school, she's an honor roll student, and she has been accepted into Ringling College of Art and Design, but Ashley only sees the failures in her life, seeing herself as worthless.


near the middle of their senior year, Samantha transfers to Ashley's high school. She is completely mute (by choice) because she was bullied for the majority of her life because she has bipolar (not brought up in this story but Samantha will get a spinoff). Ashley "meets" Samantha when she's introduced by the teacher. Ashley decides to introduce herself to Samantha, but obviously Samantha doesn't say anything. This continues for a week until Ashley gets a letter from a secret admirer (it should be pretty obvious who) this continues for a month.


then in the middle of october, Ashley is attacked by two bullies (I haven't worked out their characters yet) and Ashley goes to the hospital. This absolutely wrecks Ashley, she doesn't go to school for a month, locking herself in her room and even considers taking her own life until Samantha visits her and says her first words in YEARS "what happened?" and it wasn't referencing what happened with the bullies, but with her personal life, Samantha had caught on that Ashley was faking and wanted to know what happened. Ashley explains.


On the last day of school, Ashley gets one final note, but this time, it isn't a love note, but a suicide note from Samantha (This one is clearly marked) Ashley runs to the roof of the school and talks Samantha down, they get together, end of story.) I want this to be a dramatic story.


If you like the story and want to help out message me and I'll get back to you ASAP


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