eyes on you.

[ImageBored]

look down
don't let them see

it's not that i don't like my own look
i just don't like the feeling

the feeling of...
"Eyes on you."
even if they aren't on me

it feels like someone pushing your spine
close fisted

like someone touching an adam's apple that pops out further than your own chin

point is
i don't like people staring

Just something else. At the moment, I'm just experimenting so expect some pretty bad stuff.
It's sort of based on the exact feelings I get when look up while walking. I look down when walking so that it doesn't feel like people are staring at me.

[Intrapath]

At 6/1/14 09:50 PM, ImageBored wrote: look down
don't let them see

it's not that i don't like my own look
i just don't like the feeling

the feeling of...
"Eyes on you."
even if they aren't on me

it feels like someone pushing your spine
close fisted

like someone touching an adam's apple that pops out further than your own chin

point is
i don't like people staring

I definitely get a distinct mood from this, even in only a few lines. One thing that stuck out to me was that the first half (along with the last line) are written in a very specific style, while the latter half is a little more abstract. Overall, it feels like a draft in progress. Is it? Or is it final? Just curious. :)

[ImageBored]

At 6/5/14 05:40 PM, LDAF wrote: I definitely get a distinct mood from this, even in only a few lines. One thing that stuck out to me was that the first half (along with the last line) are written in a very specific style, while the latter half is a little more abstract. Overall, it feels like a draft in progress. Is it? Or is it final? Just curious. :)

It was final. It was sort of testing for future writing that I might do.

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