I wanna make a story out of this idea There are 3 tribes of loyalty and order and 3 of chaos and misery the tribes are at a war that will never stop until 6 hero's need to find eachother to make a tribe of balance where the tribes can live at peace while the 2 tribes are at war they try to stop them for they cannot see why it is needed for the hero's to go out on this world alone thats my idea if you think you can help me please comment and ill get back to it on you. With Love -TheManOnTheGrounds
You need to work on your grammar.
"Till one day, that lion gets up and tears the shit out of everybody."
At 5/12/14 01:51 PM, Radaketor wrote: You need to work on your grammar.
I second that. It would sound interesting, if I knew what exactly you're talking about.
At 5/12/14 05:10 PM, whiz85 wrote:At 5/12/14 01:51 PM, Radaketor wrote: You need to work on your grammar.I second that. It would sound interesting, if I knew what exactly you're talking about.
im sorry that im not the best at grammar but im just starting to get into writing i hope you understand that im not the best if you understand but thats why i need some help if any of you can i will be in your honor so please help me thank you. -TheManOnTheGrounds
At 5/12/14 10:15 PM, TheManOnTheGrounds wrote: im sorry that im not the best at grammar but im just starting to get into writing i hope you understand that im not the best if you understand but thats why i need some help if any of you can i will be in your honor so please help me thank you. -TheManOnTheGrounds
I would gladly help but i didn't understand what you need help with nor what your story's about.
"Till one day, that lion gets up and tears the shit out of everybody."
My advise: Grammar is the sister of novels, and Creativity is the father of all novels (Well in my particular belief) As long as you keep your story in the frying pan, it shouldn't be raw as any stories there are. Keep in mind, that stories should have background and sense (Unless, if you want people to hurt your ego or your creativity is under abstract structure or stray.)
Yun lang, po.
At 5/13/14 10:32 AM, TomJason wrote: My advise: Grammar is the sister of novels, and Creativity is the father of all novels (Well in my particular belief) As long as you keep your story in the frying pan, it shouldn't be raw as any stories there are. Keep in mind, that stories should have background and sense (Unless, if you want people to hurt your ego or your creativity is under abstract structure or stray.)
Yun lang, po.
Also, I forgot that you would need a lot of work if you want to have a good story.
Yun lang, po. For realz this time.
At 5/13/14 10:34 AM, TomJason wrote:
Also, I forgot that you would need a lot of work if you want to have a good story.
Yun lang, po. For realz this time.
(1st line)lot of work into it*
