This is a Poem I wrote a couple of months back, I-d be interested in seeing what you all think of it, especially since it is based on a personal experience from years back, when i actually had a near-drowning.
(Difference between a Drowning & a Near-Drowning, in a Near-drowning, the drowning victim was able to be revived)
DROWNING:
“Drowning I am Drowning and there is no one to help me,
there is no one to set me free,
The tide has dragged me out and pulled me under,
the Sea she will kill me and cast me asunder.
I try to hold my breath but my lungs are out of air,
I am slowly dying doesn't anyone care?
Gasping for air I open my mouth taking in water,
acting like a helpless lamb to my own slaughter.
Litres and litres of salty sea fill my lungs,
through my fingers my life-force runs,
with every passing second I am closer to dying,
over a watery grave my soul be flying.
The liquid cold hand of Death throttles me so,
squeezing the life out of me dragging me below,
I try to fight and make for the surface above,
to escape my torment nothing more I would Love.
Dragged even deeper I am unable to flee,
I am to die and my killer is the Sea,
I wonder just how many more have died this way,
how many more never got to see another day.
No more I can go on,
my desire to Live has gone,
the Sea she wants me and have me she Shall,
my eyes close and my heart stops I am dead without fail.
Moments before I was Drowning but now Drowned I be,
only now the Beauty of Life I finally see,
but too late I learn this for now I am dead,
so many things I have left unsaid.
However Death is not always the End,
for me it was the beginning of a Life I'd Warp and Bend,
for my heart beats once more as I find myself on Shore,
I was dead but now I am Alive once More.”
That's unbloody British that is!