At 8/6/11 10:01 AM, Carr77 wrote:
Hello!
I made 2 parts before and someone told me to add some shadows and stuff so...
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ec2a 940503e9157c42c4e0ff1dbfb317
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7ba9 df02af9dd9757494006fea90e228
There :D
Some of the smaaaall things there.... like the army dudes.... do have shadows.... but the shadows are smaaaall and you don't see them so good :(
But.... if you like this version, and there is nothing important to improve, I will upload the FLA's and send them to Steakie...
At 8/6/11 10:01 AM, Carr77 wrote:
Hello!
I made 2 parts before and someone told me to add some shadows and stuff so...
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ec2a 940503e9157c42c4e0ff1dbfb317
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7ba9 df02af9dd9757494006fea90e228
There :D
Some of the smaaaall things there.... like the army dudes.... do have shadows.... but the shadows are smaaaall and you don't see them so good :(
But.... if you like this version, and there is nothing important to improve, I will upload the FLA's and send them to Steakie...
Ok for the first one. You have 3 differnt light sources which makes the scene confusing.
1- The sun/moon in the background
2- the light reflection in the eyes
3- the light reflection on the body.
All three come from differnt angles
Think of it this way. Say someones taking a picture of you holding a mirror. The sun is behind you and there is no other light source. Will you see the reflection of the sun in the mirror? no. when you put light reflection on an object it is because the light source is hitting the object at a certian angle so that you see the light refletion. You will only ever see a light reflection from one angle unless there is more than one light source. But drawing more than one light source can get confusing for your viewers if you dont convay it properly. The same goes for shading but opposite of this, where the sun isnt thats where the shadowing goes. If you have no idea what I am talking about just google how to draw lighting or something maybe that can explain better and with pictures.
For you second animation I will tell you what I have told you for nearly all your animations. You need more going on. This isnt too bad compared to the others, its passible but I don't know if its high quality or not.
When you are watching this collab even though it is only 3 seconds for each your mind will adjust to the pace and you will notice more and more in less and less time on each. All of your animations are mainly tweens and repitition. For this one you have a movie clip of the bucket guy walking, which I like. but behind him are clones of him walking in a streight line. for example you dinosaur head one is simply a tween of heads sliding down a stick. Even though its only 3 seconds long it will get very boring to watch, becuase like i said before, your mind adjusts. If you have any questions please ask them and me or anyone else can answer them for you. I know that some of the animations that you have previously made can make the high quality stream if you put more action and less repitition in them.
About coding it would probally be best if we get someone who knows how to code, we need AS2 (steak works in CS3 which uses AS2) coding bug free. We need mainly a play button, next and previous button and a few other buttons on the menu coded like the easter eggs and stuff. So it would be probally best if we could get a at least somewhat experienced coder, If you want to learn how to do it go ahead cause if we can't find anyone you can do it.
Also please send me the .FLAs I am compileing them.
Good luck!
To everyone else
We still have tons of spots open, we currently need high quality parts so we can complete the collab. Everyone is invited to join! but make sure to take your time and make it the best you possibly can!