At 2/2/11 08:34 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:
Okay, rocket tits doesn't necessarily mean the size. (Well, yeah, it does.) What I meant was more the... perkiness of them. and they are really pointed. She's gonna poke someones eye out. It would also (as someone mentioned, I think) be pulled back by her arms. They are also drawn as if there is a bra supporting them, but they would actually fall without it (to everyones surprise/disappointment).
BTW, did you know Knocturne is proposing to Kinsei!? Eeep!
hmm, i tried to reduce the pointiness of them, but perhaps i need to more. i'll definitely work on that part. as for perkiness, i'm not sure if i'll work on it or not. i want the work to be tasteful and not pornographic, but i also want it to be attractive. in any case, i'll look into it.
here's a WIP that takes into account her position/angle change and reduces the size of each breast by about 1/5 to 1/4. I'll probably reduce them more since i can already tell the left breast (the one facing us) needs to fall to the right even more considering how far back her left arm stretches. i also still need to fix the reaching hand (but for that i need to take a photo for reference).
better? does anything (besides the reaching hand) still look off about her pose? also, please note that i removed the clouds and didn't distance blur the mountains for this WIP, since i was focused only on changing her pose.
~Wraithe