At 1/25/11 02:01 AM, Darkittys wrote:
Yeah I really need to work on the purple lines, Im just bad at it so left like that haha XD anyways besides fixing those lines (now anyways haha) I think ill leave like this now
Nice background art! I really like how it brings the piece together and compliments the empress without drawing away from her. One thing, however, the stairs don't look quite right. I can tell that you wanted to make a spiral staircase, but it didn't come out quite right. My suggestion would be to push it further to the left and draw in a cylindrical wall for it to curve around and disappear behind. It may help to look at references.
As for the purple lines, the way you designed her dress the striping should follow parallel to the curving edge and not intersect it. I think that's why it looks so odd.
anyway, great work, hope my suggestions help.