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Poetry 2010-04-16 00:36:51


Wishes
A wish for us all, we wish we had,
We could do something good, or do something bad.
Whatever we wish for grand or plain,
It might make us crazy, or utterly insane.

It came to us at night,
It came to use in day.
It came to us in a great storm
Washed down with the rain.

A wish for me,
A wish for you.
A wish to see,
What we can do.


Let's roll.

Response to Poetry 2010-04-16 00:45:09


Cute and a nice start. Keep working at it :)


Failure should push you until success can pull you.

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Response to Poetry 2010-04-16 04:39:44


It's a bit basic, but that's okay. The flow of the piece is great. I'd add some extra stanzas if I were you, though...