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Heartbreak
In a dungeon of darkness
A lonely man sits, heartless,
Even though he has a heart--
Just one that is torn apart.
Crimson red blood pumps and pumps
But still he slumps and slumps.
Into the bitter, sad ground
And fails to utter a sound.
But inside, there's a throbbing,
A bashed, broken bruise sobbing.
His soul screams and roars;
From him, putrid sadness pours.
Tears flood his sorrowful face;
Eyes sting as if struck by mace.
A nightmare and he can't awake
As is the pain of heartbreak.
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
Than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
-- ee cummings