a skull I did on some HW.
I made some anatomical errors but I still like it.
comments? reviews?

...his chin is freaking huge, it's superman's skull, lets just say that.

At 12/14/10 12:33 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: a skull I did on some HW.
I made some anatomical errors but I still like it.
comments? reviews?

Careful with the hatching on the teeth, it's almost overkill because it's somewhat hard to distinguish them.

At 12/14/10 01:28 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 12/14/10 12:33 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: a skull I did on some HW.
I made some anatomical errors but I still like it.
comments? reviews?

Careful with the hatching on the teeth, it's almost overkill because it's somewhat hard to distinguish them.

Ahhh
I see exactly what your talking about.
Thank you.

At 12/14/10 12:33 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: a skull I did on some HW.
I made some anatomical errors but I still like it.
comments? reviews?

...his chin is freaking huge, it's superman's skull, lets just say that.

It might be worthwile to go over some areas with a darker stylo?

...his chin is freaking huge, it's superman's skull, lets just say that.

It might be worthwile to go over some areas with a darker stylo?

it would make it look better.
your right.
but I think this is going to be as far as this goes.
Ill keep that in mind for the future.
I commented on your "Buy Groceries" piece here

Abstract?
maybe.
__________
Another picture the girl in the cottage took. (Her name is Charlie by the way.)
She usually hates spring because of all the pollen, and gunk and ...more pollen...
But today was special. This was her first cloud. Her father allowed her to take the "reigns" of this project.
Her cloud was a little different than the others,
but I guess clouds can be like fingerprints

______not much to say

At 12/15/10 03:38 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: ______not much to say

awesome colour

At 12/15/10 03:42 PM, CloudEater wrote:

At 12/15/10 03:38 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: ______not much to say

awesome colour

dwaaa
thanks Mr.Cloud.

At 12/15/10 03:38 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: ______not much to say

I really like the penwork in this one!!! I love this kind of doodley but still fancy art. Keep it up.

I really like the penwork in this one!!! I love this kind of doodley but still fancy art. Keep it up.

thanks spaghetti14 I commented on your fish and this awesome tower dude! tower

At 12/15/10 03:38 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: ______not much to say

Very nice, the two different pens certainly add a lot of depth. I'm no fan of these girl in the cottage drawings... they seem pretty bland.

Very nice, the two different pens certainly add a lot of depth. I'm no fan of these girl in the cottage drawings... they seem pretty bland.

thank you so much for your honest opinion. I really appreciate it : )

Yeah. People seem to like my pen drawings. But unfortunately that's all I have are these pen drawings. Right now Im having so much fun with these girl in the cottage pictures. I hope to refine this style and maybe you'll end up liking them : )

and I commented your

black cat

At 12/16/10 06:26 AM, Spac3case916 wrote: Right now Im having so much fun with these girl in the cottage pictures. I hope to refine this style and maybe you'll end up liking them : )

They look pretty good but the problem is that I can't make out what's happening in the picture because the colours are too similar and don't contrast enough. If you work on the colours more it'd be really great.

I see you really do like the lines as shading, as stated in a review of one of my portal entries, you're right about the anatomy of the skull, what is one hell of a crimson chin but it's a bloody good sketch. I think as stated by cloudeater, you should either greatly vary the contrast of colour or experiment with different colours with the blue.

:They look pretty good but the problem is that I can't make out what's happening in the picture because the :colours are too similar and don't contrast enough. If you work on the colours more it'd be really great.

ok thanks for the helpful insight. Ill try that next time Im working on one of these.
I commented your shrooooooooooOOOOoomfest

:I see you really do like the lines as shading, as stated in a review of one of my portal entries, you're right :about the anatomy of the skull, what is one hell of a crimson chin but it's a bloody good sketch. I think as :stated by cloudeater, you should either greatly vary the contrast of colour or experiment with different :colours with the blue.

thanks Toasty Ill be sure to keep that in mind with the next piece.
I commented your

judge dredd

I found drawing boxes, spheres and squished cylinders has been helping my art soooo much!
Here's an example of the types of exercises Ive been doing.
This helps me warm up.

you guys should post some of your warming up exercises on here too!!!!!
It will be fun.

Your art is pretty awesome, except for a few minor flaws in some of them, other than those little flaws though I am really enjoying your art, very nice cross hatching. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more.

At 12/17/10 12:16 AM, gmanthesandwhichking wrote: Your art is pretty awesome, except for a few minor flaws in some of them, other than those little flaws though I am really enjoying your art

It would probably help to point out what those flaws are so he can learn to fix them.

At 12/17/10 12:27 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 12/17/10 12:16 AM, gmanthesandwhichking wrote: Your art is pretty awesome, except for a few minor flaws in some of them, other than those little flaws though I am really enjoying your art

It would probably help to point out what those flaws are so he can learn to fix them.

True, but most of these flaws he has pointed out himself.

True, but most of these flaws he has pointed out himself.

fair enough
thanks johnny for saying something : )
you need to upload some are so I can comment on it : P

aaaaand

gmanthesandwhichking I commented your
orange monster

At 12/17/10 12:53 AM, Spac3case916 wrote: thanks johnny for saying something : )
you need to upload some are so I can comment on it : P

Like I said, I don't use the art portal. Just review whatever I bump my art thread with when I bump it.

I made this for the make your own Vexon and I need feedback for this beginning sketch.

This is the type of warm up exercises i've been doing.
I would like to see how you guys warm up.
Feel free to post some warm up exercises in this thread. I would really like to see them.

A wip
I watched a saw marathon and decided to make something.
final will be up by the end of today.
comments would be helpful
thanks

so im almost done with some pieces for christmas.
In the future I will post the WIP

:bump

At 12/21/10 03:40 PM, Spac3case916 wrote: A wip
I watched a saw marathon and decided to make something.
final will be up by the end of today.
comments would be helpful
thanks

Nice pic! LOVE that movie >:D

Nice pic! LOVE that movie >:D

thanks dude
I commented your pic here.

first step in my Bat

the final bat