Kewl

when i hear this i think of a guy training with his sword before he faces off with a collosal foe ( A.K.A Zeus ) tee hee hint to final part of three part story part one is on the writers club go check it out if u want it is called ink and read the revised version it gives more insight into some of the characters story's and covers up me stupid misstakes

(i spelled mistakes wrong on purpose )

Well...

...both your first one and this one kinda sound the same, but the beginnings are slightly different, and this one has more character. The drums seem out of place without a little more going on with it. It does kinda remind you of a sacraficing though, which is pretty cool (Inca, Aztecs or one of those tribes?).

-The song is themed nicely. Good job! Check out some of my techno songs and rate them, you're bound to like them!

-SuperDrummer146