again not bad
i wouldn't put that as trance tbh, but it's hard to classify, it's either miscellaneuos or weirdly ambient. i can see what you were going for, that sense of emotion. but i feel a choice of instruments has let you down a tad bit, it needs to be darker and have some deep droning pads thrown in as the mix feels a little empty. again though it's not bad.
4/5