Not bad for your 1st song. But from 00:23 it's start getting messy : there are many off-keys (at the bass too), and I don't really like the random weird sounds effects at the end. I'm not an expert reviewer tho but I recommend you to use more "fade out" snares to hide the off-keys.
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My first song! Please leave a review, it would help me out a lot. Thanks!