I love the retro synths in the intro. The melody is pretty. I don't know French but your voice is beautiful. I can feel the deep emotion in your voice as well as the instrumentals. Great use of effects as well. If I had to criticize I'd say the synths at 3:21 should be a tad louder. Yes they are that low earlier in the song but I feel like the song should progress somehow here. Maybe a pad or light percussion to vary it up a bit. Don't get me wrong, the song is still beautiful, I just think a little more variation on the instrumentals would benefit the track and help bring it to an apex. This goes for the last section as well. You're voice is incredible it should be matched with some kickass buildup instrumentals. I think it can be somewhat subtle, the minimalism of this piece is a big part of the beauty of it. I think you can still revisit this. Hell, I've revisited some tracks 4-5 times. I know this track is very special to you and I think it's great, but when I hear it I hear it can be even greater. Still a 5/5 though.