Right off the bat, I have a few thoughts.

Mixing -- everything's balanced but please, turn down the mids a bit on the master. They are a bit piercing and too many mids basically does this. It'll be much easier on the ears that way.

Musicality -- wow those chords are nice and when the other instrumentation came in, it pleasantly caught me off guard. Probably the only thing I'd recommend is to transition more gradually between sections, because we went from A to like F from the intro to the introduction of more instruments. Risers do this well, but there are other things.

BTW, your chord work caught me so pleasantly off guard, I think I'm gonna follow you and listen to your stuff more. Please post more.