quiet okay

well the song was great

Uh huh...

Well yeah it has the beat, but your gonna need alot of lyrics for this song if your just going like this. I reccomend breaks in the beat with really good music which could still have some of the beat in it, but just long enough for a short break to make the listener recognize the breaks in the song and think it interesting.

But well i'm no pro so...do whatever you like I suppose.

hmmm

rap has this thing... it can go along with anything...but than there are several things u got missing...

1) never over flow the lyrics...that late dark piano will definitly overflow you and you will get some trouble.
2) use the 64x4 rule... better for seperating the amazing lines and simple verses...
-> how to seperate it?
-with a song like this you can have synths... orr floady keys (depending on if
the lyrics are about dark shit or not)
3) do not repeat the same loop for more than64x2 patterns. break it part by different bass liness or beats.

simple and clean. good work.

[makina]