Pronunciate more

Without putting emphasis on different words and parts of words, it's just like talking to backround music. You need to sing soulfully, not just sing like you are reading off a sheet of paper.

Guitar was good, but not as good as you can do.

Not Your Best

My Friend, you already know this is pretty cliche. However, there is a fair bit of potential, and I feel that 4/10 is far too low. I like your voice and your playing, would recommend varying the riff more, as well as introducing the second guitar more frequently. If you could be bothered a bassline would add a huge amount.

Always a pleasure,

Guitarslave.