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Jul 15, 2007 | 6:55 PM EDT
File Info
2.5 MB
2 min 45 sec
3.11 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.11 / 5 stars
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1,219 Plays | 88 Downloads
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Metal, Rock - Pop

Author Comments

I wouldn't call this "done" yet, but it's a little better I think! Comments are welcome!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Quality yet again =D

The guitar in this one is a bit too quite, and somewhere in the middle, where you did this stepping thing with the guitar, song feels.. a tad empty, I guess?) But the melody is still very catchy and relaxing (and engaging at the same time). The solo at the end was very fitting, would've been awesome though if it was a bit longer)

Overall I think you music is very underrated. You're a great guitarist and I hope you music gets through =)


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

you lost me

started out nice then you change cords then want back,dont chang cords


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Feels like two songs, pushed together

Don't like the chordal run and your singing is sketchy, with more buzzy playing than I would have expected. I would remove the chordal bit or at least make it fit better and perhaps rerecord the vocals.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Ok, I like some of the changes.. Not perfect yet..

6/10 simply because i like your playing style and lyrics have meaning.
I still don't like that small chordal run though, it just destroys the feel that you have established.

I'll PM you with ideas, respond ASAP

Charlie Knight AKA OCELOT3000