I like the cutesy sound design and atmosphere of this one. The texture is a bit minimal sometimes, but I think my main issue is the sudden transitions and bizarre harmonic framework. Seems like you've strung together a bunch of different ideas for riffs here that don't have a lot of connectivity. Still, a lot of the individual ideas are really cool. I especially like the echo-y pads at 1:30 or so. The fade-in at 1:20 was also well done. Overall, not bad. Might need some more variety in the sound design and a little less variety in the composition. Otherwise, cool stuff here. Keep it up, man!