The name is fitting. This piece is pretty good. I like the ambiance that plays in the background. Throughout the song, I feel like moment is building slowly but constantly, but the build just stops and fades away. I really wanted to see something grow from it, like a new lead melody or key change or something. Throughout the song, I was expecting something to rise from repeating phrase. Point is, I feel like something could have happened or developed. There is clearly some potential in the song but you 2 did not mold it. However, this is far from a bad song, but it feels incomplete. Take what ever I say with a grain of salt because for all I know, that was your intention so it could keep the feeling of momentum building. I just think more could have happened. Keep creating and good luck!