Aww that sounds like Kanye West - Runaway (Intro) and Queen. It's really a cool and sterile style. I could imagine this in an RPG scene where the main character is talking to his love interest or they plan to take the risk and go on an adventure. REALLY inspiring piece man!
Favorited this track because it's that awesome.
Wish you all the best for your next track Shark :)
Cheers Tom
(What can you improve? Well make a smoother mastering job next time. Sounds like a bit of harshness or resonance is in your track.)