You have a very good reading, I fell out

Sick lil freeverse here. Natural flow, very loose like freestyle (ya, timing is off in parts, but it works).nice diggy

Campy and hammy AF.

Timing has a fair bit of swing on it; I think it works well. It has an off-beat vibe, but it's timed really well. That's some wizardry there.

Oh and the gated guitar-synth/pad thing is cool too.