The melodies and concept are extremely good. You'd just have to work with the percussion to make it sound more natural (it sound kind of.... "flat"? If you know what I mean. It sounds as if you've found some bad percussion sample and used it in a song without even changing it one bit.). It's also a bit too loud for my liking.
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sequel to my first song, shine. but this song is definitely way better than shine.
made in like 2 weeks on garageband on my school ipad.
tbh idk what genre this song is. it's a mix of drumstep, house, and dance.
pls leave a vote and comment! (:
bunchmusic responds:
thanks for your feedback! yeah there's not much i can do on garageband. nevertheless, i'll keep in mind what you said for my next song! (:
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