I really like this. I think the composition is great. Your synth choices, arps, samples all work. The tone is chilled but upbeat and it is a bright tune. There was a great sense of contrast and build from the start up to 2:00. At that point I was expecting either a guitar and beat, or a drop to a solo melody. A change of some sort is needed.

Mix wise. It's still on the loud side, just drag everything back, cut some high of your bassy sounds, some low off the trebles and utilise some panning. Once you have thinned the parts the mix will be more expressive but always leave some headroom.

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pitbulljones